OMG THANK YOU! THANK YOU THANK YOU!!!! no scripts, its an actual story, i'll be reading this one 😉EDIT: Kk I read it, its a bit hard to follow but its still ok (at least the spelling is good) You also messed up at one point where you out of nowhere changed the girl's name from Roxxi to Emily lol. I'd sugest maybe have the bakupod or Scouter (I think thats what it was called in your story) talk after every G-Power increase/decrease, just cutaway from the story for a sec to put: Bakupod: Haos Mantris G increase by 200" or something.
yeah, I always change the Nams outta knowwhere, Maybe cuz i was talkin to emily Harrison? I don't know! loli might do that, i did this in a Rush, I really needed to go and check on something, So episode 2 willl ahve more Detial, I Can do number 2 now if you want, also i will change the roxxi emily thing XD
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