[Bmf1027Member]

Hey guys heres a story i decided 2 put together,its a Bakugan story.Chapter 1:BMF stood in the busy city of Boston. Hundreds of Brawlers raced by,trading,brawling,and talking. " I know the loss of Sky was harsh on you,but we will comfort you" Shadow,the Mega Brontes told his owner. BMF was diferent,his life was damaged,and he was a quite troubled kid. Despite that he is a fun person. He has 7 gaurdians,that they call The Orginization.Among the strongest Bakugan in the world,lies the Orginization.Sky,BMF's 2nd and most treasured Bakugan was found out to be a member of Doomshold,a league of Evil Bakugan. But she was just using them,and once they found out,they came after her and she went into a portal to fight back. Sky was lost in that portal,between two worlds: Vestroia and Earth. He was in pain,his freind was so brave two go and try to save everyone,and was trapped in time. Fortunately,the Doomhold was destroyed. But now,BMF wondered how two get his best freind back into his hands......

[daveyp1997Member]

eh its ok needs some work and a little more description

[Bmf1027Member]

eh its ok needs some work and a little more description

And you say Meta Altair is good? When his chapters are short,and non-descriptive."Atmos gone.

[daveyp1997Member]

i mnever said they were good………………….but i never said they were bad

[Metaaltair825Member]

I like this so far!!! And I do agree that my chapters can include some work but I put 30 Chapters in one topic.

[Bmf1027Member]

I like this so far!!! And I do agree that my chapters can include some work but I put 30 Chapters in one topic.

Well thanks MT.

[daveyp1997Member]

yay you two solved the problem

[Metaaltair825Member]

But yeah, my chapters could use a complte overhaul. And an argument or problem never started.

[daveyp1997Member]

well u two got it solved before there was a fight

[Bmf1027Member]

Chapter 2

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A brawler jumped off a roof. " Hey K" BMF saw his master Kiohl,which he had helped BMF defeat Inhuman a while

[Bmf1027Member]

well u two got it solved before there was a fight

No need for a fight,were cool

[Bmf1027Member]

Chapter 3: My story

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Sky sighed and looked up at BMF. " I am a member of the Orginization,Im the head of it. My job was 2 spy on Doomhold. I actually made some freinds there,but little did I know that they planed to kill me,they knew my job" Sky told her caring freind." And now there after you,there trying to kill you. And if Blaze doesn't make it,you know what will happen" BMF was angered at these fools,for tring to ruin Bakugans only hope! "We can just barge in,but then were at high risk,for they would attack us" Crush,the Neo Dragonoid suggested. Lady Nemus kissed her Boy freind Shadow,she was worried about him. As they stood in silence,Doom Hold was planning some things." We will lead Skyress into our trap,the Building,which will hold her freinds,hangingon the walls,over a bucket of Acid" Naga ( Yes the 1 that perished) told his council. " Yes,and if she does any thing, drop the Bakugan." The council laughed. Back to the crew..... " I sense danger" BMF sniffed,he was on to them. " I sense its me that will be in the danger!" Sky worried and she decided to try to summon her psychic powers. She found a building,and she went in. She saw her freinds hanging on the wall. There was Acid under them,and she tried to save them,but they dropped them all!

[Bmf1027Member]

Chapter 4

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BMF stood in that park,in Boston. The ground shaked,it began to crack,we all thought it was a Eathquake so we got under a door frame,and some,under tables. But we were wrong,it was the summoning! Evil Bakugan's voices were heard,and hands rose from the cracks! BMF ran,but anywhere he went,he was surrounded by a crack! Sky went into Monster form and they flew up. " What the heck is happening!" BMF pointed far out,where Kiohl,V,and Shones lived. Sky was surrounded,100's of Atmos's were clouding her,charging. " Hang on,tight my pal. We might just not make it" Sky found a opening and she flew through it. The Mechanical junk kept flying after her,charging frequently. Sky dove down,knowing that Atmos's brains couldn't react THAT fast! She flew down,and flew up. Most of them lost it,and crashed to the ground,but not as much as they wanted. Sky flew up now,and they followed,they found atarget and heck no,are they gonna give up. " Ability now!" Sky yelled for somethin to be pulled. " Thundercracker!" She was boosted by 80. And there was about 80 Haos and Subterra Atmos so she gained 1600 gs. Shes now 1750 gs,so she fired at the Atmos,taking em' out. There was 1 more but she was exhausted,the defect of being a Natural Bakugan. Sky fell out! " We need someone else!" BMF saw a Bakugan with a wing under a rock. He went over and saw a Bakusteel Darkus Moskeeto 740 gs! " Can you help me? My names Kimki,Those Atmos things trapped me here!" KK the Moskeeto asked. " Your really trong man,I could use you,sure!" BMF took the rock off him,his wing looked OK. BRAWL ON!

[darkushadesMember]

I like chapter 4 ;D

[Bmf1027Member]

Chapter 5

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Kimki went into Monster form and faced the King Atmos."Why so sad pal?" Kimki began flapping his wingsvery hard,fast winds surrounded the Atmos,he couldn't control his flight,so the Atmos fell. The wind grew faster,creating a Tornado. Kimki charged into the eye of the Tornado,and attacked Atmos. " He's gonna kill himself,that Tornado's 2 fast!" Sky got up,BMF hopped on and they flew up. The Tornado dissapeared,and there lying on the ground was King Atmos,his head was de-tached and his wings were un-wired. KK went back into ball-mode and landed in BMFS hand. " Good job!" BMF thanked his new freind.They hopped on Sky and flew off. Below,they saw Brawlers getting eaten by huge cracks in the ground. " Doomhold,there plan 2 destroy Earth is coming!" Sky flew faster. BMF gripped Sky tighter,he was angry. They flew into K,V,S's house. They saw.........OH NO,IT CAN'T BE! ITS NAGA,AND HE KILLED KIOHL,VENDETTA,AND SHONENBOY! " You peisce of crap! Im gonna take you down!" BMF threw out Lady Nemus,Boulder,Lucky,Shadow,Crush,Tails,Sky,and Kimki! They charged at Naga. Hits,drains,kicks,and more,Naga was surrounded! " Elimination!" Naga set a thing on Sky,it drilled into her body. It looked like it hurt. Then Sky Exploded! " SKY,NO! THAT SCUM BRAINED IDIOT,HE WILL NEVER MESS WITH ANYONE AGAIN!"BMF ordered them to charge on!

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