[AdminKeymaster]

Prologue:Atoma had very wealthy parents. He got every Bakugan he wanted. his favorite was his Ventus Ingram. One day he woke up and something told him to bring his Ingram to school. After school he was walking home and saw an ambulance in front of his house. He asked a police officer what had happened. The police officer said "One of the neighbors around here reported a strange-looking person walking into this house. Then there were some screams. There were two dead bodies found inside." Atoma went inside the house and noticed his bakugan were all gone. He started crying and then remembered his Ingram in his pocket. He found a Gate Card and an Ability card on the ground. He noticed that they were both used with an Ingram. He pulled out Ingram and then the Ingram started talking. It was telling him that it was his Guardian Bakugan.How do you like it so far? Chapter 1 coming soon.

[omegadragonoidMember]

good fan-fic

[AdminKeymaster]

Thanks

[YoshipatrolMember]

Ummm. Alright, I'm giving you props for being one of the few people to actually use grammar but, ok did his parents die or where there two random people inside his house?

[omegadragonoidMember]

yoshi has a point

[AdminKeymaster]

The “guy”, I guess you could call him that, will be seen a lot. It was his parents. You will find out the rest later.

[darkushadesMember]

I like it hurry up wiht chapter 1

[omegadragonoidMember]

a little short too

[AdminKeymaster]

Im making it up as I go, so it could take a while. The actual chapters are long tho.

[YoshipatrolMember]

The "guy", I guess you could call him that, will be seen a lot. It was his parents. You will find out the rest later.

Ok thas good, though the whole thing is still kinda wierd: "Atoma had walked asthis dead prents and saw that al of his Bakugan were stolen. He started to weep about his Bakugan tha he'd never see again..."LOL my version, just

[AdminKeymaster]

Yeah, I was in a hurry. Sry.

[AdminKeymaster]

Chapter 1:Three years laterAtoma: Gate Card Set!Luke: Gate Card Set!Atoma: Ingram, stand!Bakupod: Ventus Ingram, 550gs, stands.Luke: Atmos, Stand!Bakupod: Darkus Atmos, 650gs, standsAtoma: Ability Activate: Thunder Crusher!Bakupod: Ingram + 200gs. Ingram is now 750gs.Luke: Gate Card Open! Wind Counter!Bakupod: No Ventus Bakugan can play abilitys this turn. Ingram - 200gs.Luke: Get him, Atmos!Bakupod: Atmos wins round one.Three rounds later:Atoma: Gate Card Open! The Light!Bakupod: All Darkus Bakugan are reduced to 200gs. Ingram wins.Luke: Great job, Atoma.Atoma: Thanks.Later*Atoma is walking back to his home, if you call a hidden cave home.*Atoma: You were great, Ingram.Ingram: Thank you.

[omegadragonoidMember]

a little short

[darkushadesMember]

a little short

This^ and is luke his enemy or something

[YoshipatrolMember]

a little short

This^ and is luke his enemy or something

Luke is his friend, even I could tell hat.

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