[omegadragonoidMember]

wow lux, i didn't know you were this talented at bakugan fanfics

[YoshipatrolMember]

wow lux, i didn't know you were this talented at bakugan fanfics

I wouldn't call it talent, but rather just skill at writing. Not to mention near everyone else's fanfics makes his look even better. But its definately a nice story. i sure like it I'm still working on mine, behind the scenes lol

[Metaaltair825Member]

wow lux, i didn't know you were this talented at bakugan fanfics

I wouldn't call it talent, but rather just skill at writing. Not to mention near everyone else's fanfics makes his look even better. But its definately a nice story. i sure like it I'm still working on mine, behind the scenes lol

Ehh, what do you mean that everyone else's Fanfics make Lux's look better? No Bad Fanfic makes another look better, all are equal, unless if you can't follow a storyline.

[YoshipatrolMember]

wow lux, i didn't know you were this talented at bakugan fanfics

I wouldn't call it talent, but rather just skill at writing. Not to mention near everyone else's fanfics makes his look even better. But its definately a nice story. i sure like it I'm still working on mine, behind the scenes lol

Ehh, what do you mean that everyone else's Fanfics make Lux's look better? No Bad Fanfic makes another look better, all are equal, unless if you can't follow a storyline.

Ok lets say you have two options of food to eat. One is a fodd you hate A LOT! But the other is a pile of dog No Curseing Yoshi 😉 Don't you think the dog shit is going to make the food you hate look a lot better? And anyways no offense but a lot of you guys' fanfics SUCK HARD! You guys can't write, you all use like scripting formats for one reason or another, there's horrible grammer/punctuation (and spelling at that) and you guys all have the same crap storyline... (I'm not posting crap storyline because I'm lazy, go look for it elsewhere)

[AdminKeymaster]

wow lux, i didn't know you were this talented at bakugan fanfics

I wouldn't call it talent, but rather just skill at writing. Not to mention near everyone else's fanfics makes his look even better. But its definately a nice story. i sure like it I'm still working on mine, behind the scenes lol

Ehh, what do you mean that everyone else's Fanfics make Lux's look better? No Bad Fanfic makes another look better, all are equal, unless if you can't follow a storyline.

Ok lets say you have two options of food to eat. One is a fodd you hate A LOT! But the other is a pile of dog shit... Don't you think the dog shit is going to make the food you hate look a lot better? And anyways no offense but a lot of you guys' fanfics SUCK HARD! You guys can't write, you all use like scripting formats for one reason or another, there's horrible grammer/punctuation (and spelling at that) and you guys all have the same crap storyline... (I'm not posting crap storyline because I'm lazy, go look for it elsewhere)

thats so true i think most of the other fanfics suck hard except SN's Kiohls Lux and a few other people

[YoshipatrolMember]

wow lux, i didn't know you were this talented at bakugan fanfics

I wouldn't call it talent, but rather just skill at writing. Not to mention near everyone else's fanfics makes his look even better. But its definately a nice story. i sure like it I'm still working on mine, behind the scenes lol

Ehh, what do you mean that everyone else's Fanfics make Lux's look better? No Bad Fanfic makes another look better, all are equal, unless if you can't follow a storyline.

Ok lets say you have two options of food to eat. One is a fodd you hate A LOT! But the other is a pile of dog shit... Don't you think the dog shit is going to make the food you hate look a lot better? And anyways no offense but a lot of you guys' fanfics SUCK HARD! You guys can't write, you all use like scripting formats for one reason or another, there's horrible grammer/punctuation (and spelling at that) and you guys all have the same crap storyline... (I'm not posting crap storyline because I'm lazy, go look for it elsewhere)

thats so true i think most of the other fanfics suck hard except SN's Kiohls Lux and a few other people

Ya, Kiohl's was the other one I had in mind that stopped me from saying Lux's was the only good one. I haven't given too many others a chance due to the load of garbage ones. I'd like to post mine, but I'm all weird like that when it comes to writing. I don't like to be judged...

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Chapter 5*Shoo! Shoo, you foul beast!* said moskeeto to a kitten, intruding into Suika’s house. The cat pawed at moskeeto, and moskeeto began flying.“Aaw, isn’t it cute? We should keep it!” Suika said.“We should check to see if it belongs to anyone first, correct? For all we know, it could be a stray.” Lucian said.Suika picked up the kitten and and said “You’re right… Poor thing, looks like she hasn’t eaten in days! Let’s feed her first…” Suika looked sad, she really liked kittens. “What do kittens eat? We don’t have cat food, and we can’t afford any…”“Sure we can. I have 2500 Pebs… You guys?” Arata asked.Lucian and Suika reached into their pockets. Suka pulled out a 500 peb coin and a 1000 peb bill. Lucian pulled out a lone 2000 peb bill. “It seems like I’m buying.” Lucian said. “Suika is letting us stay at her house, which she pays for… Arata, you need that money to buy some equipment. I have no use for my money as of now, aside from paying Suika for letting me stay here.”“Or, better yet, we all pitch in for it.” Arata said.“Meow!” “Oh yeah, the cat’s starving. Let’s go now.” Said Arata.As they got towards the back of the store where the food is, they saw a girl dressed up in a red and black outfit—very similar to the vexos leader Spectra’s, minus the mask and whacky hairdo. She looked at the three, and saw Lucian. “My my, what do we have here? A traitor, perhaps? I surely hope not, Master Naga would certainly not be pleased.”“No, Mistress Visa. These are merely prisoners of mine. I am keeping watch of them for Naga, as to keep them out of his mind.”Suika was in a state of shock. This old lady is the very one that was Naga’s master those few years ago! “D-do I know you from somewhere?!” She shouted.“Oh, she’s a feisty one. Have you alerted Master Naga about these prisoners?”“No, but Anti knows. He’s seen them.”“Ah, I see. What brings you down here?”“I could ask the same thing.”“I came down here to buy—no, steal—some batteries.” Visa said.“I came down to the back to get the prisoners their food for the week.” Lucian said.“Cat food? Ahaha, I like the way you think, Lucian. You will most certainly get a promotion.” Visa said, and a portal appeared in front of her. She picked up the batteries and walked into the portal.“Whew, talk about close. I thought we would be taken…” Arata said.“No, you see, Arata, when a vexos captures a prisoner, they are in charge of that prisoner. Suika’s been through the same thing, just not with Visa. Visa is the leader of the Vexos—aside from Naga.” Lucian said.“I swear, I’ve seen her before… Ah, at the shrine! She’s the one who appeared with naga!”There was a click from the opposite side of the shelf. They ran around to see what made the sound, but whatever it was that made the sound was gone.On the way to Suika’s house, they were stopped by the Card Shop owner. “Have you gotten a new cat? I see that you have some cat food.” He asked.“No, we’ve found a stray playing with our bakugan. She’s just a little kitten, she doesn’t look even three months old.” Lucian said.“A stray? It could be… It could be my little kitten!” he said. You could see his eyes light up, clearly he was excited. “Can I see it?”-At the house-“It is her! Thank you for finding her… I know how to repay you! Follow me, back to the card shop.”He took the trio, their bakugan, and his cat with him. They went to behind the shop, and entered the storage room. “You may take any combination of three cards, one trap, which we just got in, or a bakugan. Come see me when you’re done.”“I’ll start by looking at the traps.” Arata said, opening a box. “Oh, sweet! There’s a Percian! It’s in Darkus, to!” *Sounds good to me, but what effect does it have?* Asked Phere.“Hm… Changes to Haos, Subterra, and Ventus.”Arata looked in another box and found a new bakugan. It looked like a Manta Ray—the shop owner didn’t know that one like it existed. It was a Darkus Manton, with 600 gs.Suika was opening another box. In it, she found bakugan. She picked up a ventus one and sat it down on a piece of metal. It opened up to be a Hydranoid, something that you don’t see every day. She chose that, and three other cards.=(Ability)Flaming Claw: Play during a battle where you have a Pyrus Bakugan. Each time the opponent activates an ability, they loose 50 gs.= =(Gate)Windy Beach: (P120, A60, ST140, H80, D90, V30) The owner of this card chooses two bakugan at this gate and swaps their gpower.==(Gate) Genius Exploit: If the two standing bakugan on this gate are the same attribute, when one gets a gpower boost, so does the other one.=It was a hard choice for Lucian. He didn’t want any traps, seeming that his bakugan’s attributes are always unpredictable. Clear bakugan aren’t around anymore, they were already hard to get before they were stolen by Naga. He didn’t need any more cards. So, he got Arata a bakugan instead. He chose a Haos Klawcer with 570 gs, as well as a Haos trap, Scorpion. They said thanks to the owner, and went back home. “Wow, I got two new Bakugan AND two traps! How cool is this?!?” Arata said.*I say you’re lucky to have me.* said the Klawcer. *Oh, don’t be so mean.* said the Manton.“Hey, Suika… You said you’d take me back to my time. When can we do that?”“How does now sound? Grab my hand, I’ll say the chant.”“Wouldn’t we end up under the ground?”“Oh yeah… Okay, to the back of your apartment.”So, they went to the apartment. Arata grabbed his bakugan, traps, and cards. They went behind Arata’s house, and Suika started the chant.

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Ohoho, Arata is bringing his bakugan back to his time. What will everyone think of it?

[omegadragonoidMember]

when are you going to make the next part of your fanfic lux, i can't wait

[AdminKeymaster]

Probably next week. I did 5 because I thought that CH4 was a disappointment on how Arata didn't capture squat.

[omegadragonoidMember]

when are you gonna post it lux? i want to see the next chapter already. i know i'm not that patient and all that

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Chapter 6“Hey guys, look what I’ve got!” Arata said. He was over at his friends house, showing them his bakugan and traps.“Wow, where did you get those?!? They aren’t in stores yet, are they?” His friend asked.“Nope.” “So, can you show them to us?”“Sure thing…” Arata said, pulling out his ID. He started rolling his Klawcer onto the card, when it hopped over the card and opened up. *Hey, what are you trying to do, tear this house down? If I stand on the gate, I’ll go into monster form!” it said.

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Chapter 7“Where’s Moskeeto? MOSKEETOOOOOOO!” Suika called.“Could you have left him? I mean, he’s always out, he may have fallen or he may be with Arata.” Lucian said.*I think Lucian is right.* said the Hydranoid. *Why not check?*“I can’t time travel when I feel like it, I have a limit. If I do it too much, I could die. We don’t want that do we?”*Hm… You’re right. Let’s wait for tomorrow?* Hydranoid said.“Okay, but until then, I can’t.”--Back in Arata’s time, on the planet vestal—“Madam Visa,” said the King of Vestal, “I’m sure you know about Spectra’s failure in capturing Vestroia. It’s the earthlings who have stopped us from being able to do so. The traitors have been captured and locked up. I officially appoint you as leader of the Vexos. Do not fail like Spectra and Gus have.”“I will not, King.”“Now, here I have your new bakugan. Take this here and revive Naga.” Said the King, handing a box to Visa. “Thank you, King. I shall be going now.”“So, what did the King give to me?” Visa asked herself. As soon as she got off the kings castle grounds, she opened the box. A small ball and some cards were in it, as well as a note.The note read…Dear Visa,Take this bakugan, he has something that will make your task easy. Use the powers of the cores to revive Naga’s spirit, then capture the spirit. Bring it to our labs and have the mechanics build a mechanical body for Naga’s spirit, and then we shall take over earth.“Hm, what bakugan did I get?” she said, looking into the box. She saw a red ball, picked it up and it opened. *Why, hello there. Master the King has said that you are my new owner. What may your name be, Madam?*“Call me Visa. You?”*I am Verias, pleasure to meet you.*“Ah. I never would have guessed.” Visa said. She looked into the box and saw one last thing, an

[omegadragonoidMember]

this is an awesome fan-fic again. it really is lux's unnamed fan-fic wewt

[YoshipatrolMember]

LMFAO! I did that kind of thing with my fanfic but yours was just outrageous.

[AdminKeymaster]

Oh wow I've been ignoring this.Chapter 8 up soon...

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