[CureDream4evaMember]

okay the date the portal was opened at first was on my birthday ironicall, december 21st…. ._. how ironic….

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CD4E=doomsdayXPThe reason why I chose that is because of the 2012 stuff, so I focus the story around that.

[CureDream4evaMember]

CD4E=doomsdayXPThe reason why I chose that is because of the 2012 stuff, so I focus the story around that.

i kinda figured that, but that was just ironic there XD

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Changed mokeeto to green and red (aka Pyrus/Ventus)Next Chapter coming soon, I'm writing it right now.

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Chapter 2As the light died down, he looked around. It was the same time of day, same place, different time. He looked up at the shrine, and noticed that there was a glowing purple bubble on top of it, shooing out lazers at anyone who dared venture close. *You see that abomination? It’s a bakugan that came from vestroian space. It has no name, but it’s way more powerfull than the six legendary soldiers combined. Naga still has more power, so I CAN BEAT HIM.* said Moskeeto. *Well, maybe not… Hey, Suika, give him the card.*“What card? And why is my apartment messed up?”“Naga messed up your apartment as a way to vent his anger. And this card.” Suika said, reaching into her pocket. “Try setting moketo on this card. But be sure to do it In the open, and make sure to run after it’s on.”“Whatever.” Said Arata. “What’ll happen?”“You’ll see… Follow me, I’ll show you where to do it.” Suika said. They ran through the forest that was behind Arata’s house, and it started getting cold. Very cold.“Wh-why is i-it so cold…? It’s Summer, right?” asked Arata.“Yeah, but you know that river up ahead? Well, the Vexos are freezing all the lakes and rivers.”“Why? Are there no ice skating rinks in Vestroia or something?” Arata Asked.“No, they’re making a city that stretches almost everywhere.” “Okay, two more questions. One, how do you know this? And second, What do the Vexos have to do with Naga?”“I know this because I have a friend in the Vexos. And it’s a long story, I’ll tell it to you when we get somewhere warmer,”“Wait, a friend in the Vexos?”“I’lll explain later.”--Later, at a field a couple miles from the apartment—“So, should I do the thing with the card yet?” asked Arata.“Nope… I need you to come down here,” Suika said, pulling a Walkie-talkie from her belt, “ Open the stairs, we’ve got a guest.”“Okay, opening the gates.” Said somebody on the Walkie-talkie.In the middle of the field, a patch of land was moving up. Suika said “Come on, before we get caught.”So, they ran down the stairs. The piece of ground that rose was going back down, so the lights were turning on. “Welcome to our base.

[novawolfMember]

should be on an episode, it frikinrocks

[YoshipatrolMember]

Very nice story and I like the little like incerpts in there. BTW you totally stole one of my names lol except Arata was the last name for my character not the first, and she wasn't a male…

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lolz.Anyways, I'll start on the next chapter now. Expect it tonight or tomorrow.

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So yeaaah. Chapter 3's finished. And I changed the capture way, you'll see it in this chapter.

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Chapter 3-The next day-“Arata, wake up. It’s 5:00. Hurry up and get ready to go, we’ve got to get that bakugan.” Said Suika.“Ugh, just a few more minutes… Wait, bakugan? I’M UP I’M UP!” “I thought so. I went back to your house a few years ago and got you some clothes, they’re over on the table.” “Where’s the shower?”“Well, seeming that the water sources are almost all frozen and the person who made this didn’t make a piping system that reaches a few miles into the ocean and have a de-salter, we don’t have showers. We do, however, have underground hot springs… Made by aquos, warmed by pyrus.”“Well, why not make a piping system with a lake or river or something?”“Where do you intend on getting the pipes?”“The torn-down houses.”*Good luck with that. Naga keeps a close eye on the stuff we take. He doesn’t know we’re here, but he knows when we take something and rampages around earth. Yeah, we forgot to mention that he’s really fast. Fast like a marsupial.*“Wayta quote Bob and Tom there… So, that means we have to drink bakugan spit?”“Could be worse…” said Suika, shuddering at the thought.“Okay then, I’m of the the warm spit pools.”-30 minutes later-“Okay, I’m back. So, can we leave now?” said Arata.*How’d you like our spit?*“It was refreshing… For spit.”Suika chuckled. “Okay, let’s go.”As they were reaching the guards of the stairs, the door opened and someone started coming down the stairs. “Ah, Suika! How are you?” said the figure. The light was to bright to make out his facial features, but it was clear that he was male. “Oh, hey Lucian. I’m fine, how are you?” said Suika.“I’m doing great. Naga was quite the menace last night! He tore down an entire neighborhood when he found traces of your magical essence.”“Wait, say what? Suika, you’re on NAGA’S side?” asked Arata.As Lucian walked down the stair further and reached the stairs, you could make out his features. He looked a awful lot like Gus, the sub-terra brawler of the original Vexos. He had long, wavy hair that was light blonde, and he donned a bracelet on his left hand that held three bakugan and had a small watch, and right side had a bracelet that held his cards. In his pocket on his shirt, he what looked like a notepad, except smaller and electronic. “No, she is not a Naga follower! Why would you think that?” asked Lucian.“Well, on the way here she said that she had a friend in the Vexos. She never explained that part…”“Oh yeah… Hehehe… Well, you see, Lucian here is a spy. He is only on Nagas side becau—“ she was cut off.“THAT LUCIAN IS A SPY.”“Erm, yes… If only I got the reference… Anyways, he has a very VERY valuable bakugan that Naga gave to him. It’s called Mirral, and it’s like a clear bakugan on steroids.”“Oh wow. I’ve got to see this. May I take Moskeeto out for a test run?”*Be my guest. Hey Mirral.**Yeah?**Promise not to bleed on my suit and I promise to kill you quickly.*“Let’s show this newcomer to our battlefield, shall we?”--Later, on the battle field—“First, I’ll need to explain the brawling basics.” Lucian said.“Don’t worry, I’m a top brawler. I was ranked #54 on the standings two years ago, after all.”“Oh, then be my guest. Gate Card, set.”“Gate card set, who should go first?”*Oooh me, ooh me!* said Moskeeto.“Yes, you may go first, Arata.”“Okay then, Bakugan Brawl! Dual Attribute Moskeeto, stand!” Arata said, throwing the bakugan on Lucian’s card.=Ventus/Pyrus Moskeeto 600gs on Lucian’s gate=“Ah, taking out the opponents’ card first? I think not. Siege, you’re up!” Lucian said, rolling the siege on the ground. It hit a rock right as it was going to land on Lucian’s card, and went right over it and onto Arata’s card.

[Haos-EmilyMember]

awsums lux, Awsums

[AlphaPercivalMember]

I like that the cards aren't too overpowered.

[AdminKeymaster]

That and they make sense =P

[omegadragonoidMember]

this is the most epic story ever

[YoshipatrolMember]

this is the most epic story ever

Thats Lux for you...

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Thanks for the support guys~Chapter 4*Welcome to the team, Atmos.* said Mirral. *Yeah, nice ta’ meetcha.* said Moskeeto, trying to be nice. *Thanks, both of you. Hey human, what was your name again?*“Arata. Is there anything I should call you? How does Phere sound?”They were back in Suika’s house. It was an intense battle. (well, for Arata. Suika could have handled it pretty well.) They were now welcoming Atmos to the team, and telling him the plan.“…What?” asked Suika.“You know, like AtmosPhere?”*I like it.* said Atmos.*Well, it’s official.

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