[daveyp1997Member]

proluge:11 year old David was walking home from school it was raining so hard he felt like he was being peirced by needles.Then out of nowhere it stopped and then cards started raining little did david know it was going to change his life forever.part 1: David ran as quick as he could to get home when Harold Davids rival gave him a swift punch to the gut.David already knew what he wanted so he caughed a few times and both them yelled bakugan brawl!!!!!!(note the next part uses dialouge not nariation)David:gate card set....pyrus juggernoid 350 gs stand on my card!!!Harold:gate card set.... darcus reaper stand 450gs stand on opponets cardDavid:heh heh gate card open combo battle!!!!pyrus....what the...the world started swirling and he saw a 1st evolution hydranoid and a helios battling hard then right after that they ere back in the battleDavid:whoah that was weird ok lets continue wait what the...this is a viper helios card and out poped a ball and so did a hydranoid for HaroldHarold:ok this is weird man lets end this battleDavid:agreed Harlod+David:TIE DRAWN!to be continued......

[omegadragonoidMember]

man…..it didn't have a good, clear ending…..but still good..

[daveyp1997Member]

its my first writing made it up on spot

[daveyp1997Member]

-later after battle-Hydra:Well harold lets get to your houseHarold:*stumbles*wow you can talkhelios:as can IDavid:wow i cant belive it i came up with a ventus helios that can talk!!Helios:well lets get to your house DavidDavid:ok man-at home-David:wow helios youre 750 gs could help me in battleHelios:wel i am a very powerful bakuganDavid:could you ttel me how you got hereHelios:ok here we goin the dimension of vestroia i was roming around my home world when a corrupted bakugan named machine fortress who used forbidden abilities attacked me i fought him opff till he fleed to the cores of vestroia so i ran after him but the portal he made and had closed before i could reach it so i went to the ege of my world to find the forbidden door but when i did that hydranoid attacked me he was filled with anger and power but when he got to your world he got turned back to a normal hydranoid but he was in ball form after the battle wich im guessing is the only sustaniable way to live as a bakugan in your world so when fortess went he must have messed with the silent core and thought with his machine abilities he could harness the power but i knew he couldnt i triesd to stop him but machines arent the types to talk so i guess the only explanation is he was overpowered by it it may be crazy but its true and thats how i got hereto be continued....

[omegadragonoidMember]

isn't this like the first series of bakugan, the first or so episodes. it sounds like it. i think you copied it.(this is only a suspision)

[daveyp1997Member]

well actually i is changng things rright now read more

[daveyp1997Member]

David:well thats nice also if you wanna know my names David Alcousta a master ventus brawlerHelios:well it will be a pleasure working with a ventus brawler alot of people hate ventus so its nice to find youDavid:nice to know youre here *rapid shaking*...whoah what that rumbling *looks outside* whoa ships and there bakugan on them helios get in my pocket quickly theres a fortress on there

[daveyp1997Member]

im mixing some things from bakugan in but its being like a normal life changed because of bakugan get nit got it good

[daveyp1997Member]

David:wait…..the vexos got my parents!!!!!Heather:yes but weve retrived stolen humans beforeDavid:i have to stop them.I'll rip them to shreds is i have to *pant*gahhhh*pant*Heather:will you help usDavid:help you whatHeather:stop the vexos and get your parents backDavid: ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;DHeather:ill take that as a yesDavid:lets get me some more bakuganHeather:watch out for a darkus preyas hes been terrorizing us when we leave the lairDavid:ok ill be back soon

[daveyp1997Member]

its finally done after a hour i got my 4th part in

[daveyp1997Member]

bump

[omegadragonoidMember]

this waz the best part of all…….and DON'T SPAM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!this is spam:

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[brawl4lifeMember]

this waz the best part of all.......and DON'T SPAM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!this is spam:

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NO ITZ NOT!JEEZ. He just wants to bump his topic! =pIt is not spam.

[daveyp1997Member]

this waz the best part of all.......and DON'T SPAM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!this is spam:

bump

NO ITZ NOT!JEEZ. He just wants to bump his topic! =pIt is not spam.

thank you

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