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Chapter 1, The Brawl is On!Tyler walked into the Park, and saw his friend Jonathan get crushed by his Masked oppenent. "HAHAHAHAHA," the masked dude, Vilgan, went like insanly. "You will never beat me, EVAH!" he continued. "I'll brawl You, and beat you!" Tyler Proclaimed. "BAKUGAN BRAWL"Tyler: "Gate Card SET!"Vilgan: "GATE CARD SET!"Tyler: "Bakugan Brawl! Aquos Wilda, 520G STAND!"Vilgan: "BAKUGAN BRAWL!!! Sub-Terra Elfin 700G Stand!"Tyler: "Gate Card OPEN! Clear River, so I'm at 670G and your at 700G"Vilgan: "HA! Now I will crush Wilda!!!"Tyler: "NO!!!"TO BE CONTINUEDChapter 2: The Defeat.Vilgan: "So now the score is 1-0."Tyler: " BAKUGAN BRAWL! Ventus Alpha Percival, 630G Stand!Vilgan: "That's the Best you've got? Bakugan Brawl! Darkus Mega Brontes, Stand! Now GATE CARD OPEN! Construction Gate. So I'm at 810G and your At 730!"Tyler: "Ability Card Activate! Updraft so I'm at 870!"Vilgan: "Ability Card ACTIVATE! Dark Growth so now I'm at 890!"Tyler: "I use bakugan Trap Scorpion! Change to Aquos! So now I'm at 940G!"Vilgan: "Brontes!!! NO!!!"Tyler: "So now it's 1-1!"Vilgan And Tyler: "GATE CARD SET!"Vilgan: "Bakugan Brawl! Darkus Neo Drago 520G stand!"Tyler: "Bakugan brawl! Haos terrorclaw 510G stand!"Vilgan: "GATE CARD OPEN! River Valley so I'm at 640G and your at 660G"Tyler: "Destroy him, Terrorclaw! Now the score is 2-1!"Vilgan: "Now we both get our Bakugan back! Bakugan Brawl! Sub-Terra Elfin 700G stand!"Tyler: "Bakugan Brawl! Haos Terrorclaw 510G Stand! Now Gate card open! Anger Rooms. ABILITY CARD ACTIVATE: Haos 2. Since my terrorclaw's Printed G is 160G or more less than your printed g, I get your Gate card, so I win!Chapter 3: The Trouble with Villians.After Vilgan was defeated, He left and Jonathan went home. Then Dan Kuso, showed up. "Hello," he said, "I'm Dan Kuso, and you are an Expert Brawler. My friend Runo Moved away and left this behind, and you need to have it so she doesn't kill me." Dan gave Tyler a Haos Delta Drago. Before Tyler could say anything, Dan was gone. "This is odd. I better follow him," Tyler said to himself. He followed Dan to a cave, and snuck in after him. He went through hallways and up stairs, to a secret area on the Top of Mt.Wavern, named in Wavern's Name by Kids in Rememberance of her. Up there, it turned out Dan was an imposter, and was really a wanted villian for using Bakugan to attack people, Greegol. He brawls people and Captures any of the bakugan he Wants if he defeats them. Out of nowhere the Delta Drago just went to Greegol. Tyler ran out of the secret area, and on the way, found Racks of Bakugan, he grabbed a ton and a whole deck of cards. He made it back to the cave exit, and took the wrong way because he was now in the abondened mines. "Now, this can be a Problem." Tyler saidChapter 4: Greegol's GoldTyler explored the mines until he made it to an opening. FREEDOM. He ran to the exit but it was immediatly closed. Greegol fell out of nowhere and said, "You have fallen into my trap. I see you have stolen some Bakugan and Cards from my rack." Tyler said, "Well, I think I know the next part of the trap. You want to brawl, huh?" Greegol said, "Follow me." Greegol took Tyler to a Stadium that was brightly lit. Greegol then took out 3 Haos Bakugan. The brawl was on.Chapter 5: Greegol's Going DOWN... or not.Tyler and Greegol: Gate Card Set!Greegol: Loser goes first, meaning you.Tyler: You'll eat those words! Bakugan Brawl! Pyrus Altair stand with 670G!Greegol: You were bold to steal my Bakugan, and Bolder to use them against me, but none of that counts. Bakugan Brawl! Haos Spin Drago 650G Stand, so GATE CARD OPEN! Dragonoid Character card, so I'm at 990 and your at 770!Tyler: Ugh, I've got no counter! Greegol: So the score is 1-0.Tyler: .........Greegol: You took 1 second too long so I'm gonna go again! Bakugan Brawl!!! Haos Foxbat 650G Stand!Tyler: Just what I wanted. Ability Card Activate! Wired, if my roll results in a battle, My wired gets 200G added to him. BAKUGAN BRAWL! Pyrus Wired 600G stand. Gate Card Open! now I get +200G and the Card is Stand Off, no Ability Cards can be played at this Battle! So I'm at 940 and your at 730. Since no ability Cards can be played, I win that one so the score is 1-1.Greegol: You just showed your inner chatterbox.Chapter 6: Pyrus Burns the UserTyler: Now Ability Card ACTIVATE Pyrus 2! So while this card is in my used Pile, I can take the Highlighted Bonus instead.Greegol and Tyler: GATE CARD SET!Greegol: Bakugan Brawl! Haos Delta Drago 2 650G stand! Now I get all my Bakugan Back!Tyler: Bakugan Brawl! Pyrus Fencer 530G stand! Now I get all of my Bakugan back!Greegol: Gate Card open! Anger Rooms So I'm at 800 and your at 560G!Tyler: But, I take the Highlighted bonus so I'm at 750G. And I'm technically still Pyrus so I use the Ability card Copper Launcher. And since this is a copper gate, I get the bonus again so I'm at 910G.Greegol: Come on, I lose again!!!Tyler: Now the score is 1-2! Greegol: Bakugan Brawl! Haos Foxbat 650G stand!Tyler: Bakugan Brawl! Pyrus Altair 670G stand! Gate Card open! Moonburn so the G powers are 840 and 700!Greegol: Great, I left my Ability Cards on that rack, and Tyler took them!The field closed, and the exit opened up again.Tyler left the mines and was back in the town. His friend Jonathan was out there, and they both went home. Chapter 7: NagaTyler and Jonathan were walking through the woods, and saw a Bakugan ball on the Ground. Tyler Picked it up, and it opened. It was Naga, he was reincarnated. He turned good through this reincarnation. He gave it to Jonathan, and then Jonathan found a Haos Ingram on the ground. He gave it to Tyler. Now they both had new Bakugan, and were ready to take on new oppenents. But for them to be in the top 5 in rank, they had to Beat the 5 Legendary Brawlers.They were ready to brawl. The biggest problem was there are many evil brawlers they need to beat first, and that includes both the Maxus Bakugan.Chapter 8: The hunt for Maxus Helios.Jonathan and Tyler decided to embark on a Journey to New Vestroia to fight Maxus Helios and Maxus Drago. They went to Brawl Maxus Helios first. They explored all of New Vestroia until there was a Huge Tunnel, and had footprints that looked like the bottom of Leefram, Spindle, Klawgor, and Scraper. "This must be the way to Maxus Helios," Jonathan said. "Yeah, you ready Ingram?" Tyler said. "Tyler, I'm ready, and will brawl to the very end!" Ingram replied. "Come on Naga, we need to brawl Maxus Helios," Jonathan said. "Don't worry, I will!" Naga said. Tyler and Jonathan went in the Tunnel, to brawl Maxus Helios. At the End of the tunnel, there was a door. They opened it, and saw Maxus Helios, standing in the Center of a cave lit by bright crystals, and there was a bridge to where Maxus Helios was, on a Mini Island surrounded by water. There were three waterfalls in the cave. Helios Moved back a little.Tyler and Jonathan both set there Gate Card.Tyler: Bakugan Brawl! Haos Ingram 500G Stand!Jonathan: Bakugan Brawl! Clear Naga 550G Stand!Maxus Helios: Bakugan Brawl! I Stand on Both Gate Cards!WHAT WILL HAPPEN IN THIS BRAWL? READ THE NEXT CHAPTER AND FIND OUT!Chapter 9: Helios MaximusTyler and Jonathan: GATE CARDS OPEN! Tyler: My gate Card is Dragonoid, so I'm at 670! Jonathan: My gate card is Needle's Eye, so I have the lower G-Power than Helios so...Maxus Helios: NOT SO FAST! I Use Ability card: Maxus Strike!Jonathan: Hmm, never heard of Maxus Strike. Maxus Helios: It gives me +500G and makes all effects of the Gate card go away!Jonathan: ...I lost.Tyler: Don't worry! Bakugan Trap Haos Hylash! Now Combine with Ingram!Maxus Helios: Your Ingram may be quicker but it's not tougher!Tyler: No!!! Not Ingram!Maxus Helios: Bwahahaha!Tyler: I lost too...Tyler and Jonathan were teleported out of the Cave. "Man, we need to fight Maxus Drago first so we brawl a Maxus that shows Mercy," Jonathan suggested. "You're right," Tyler replied.Chapter 10: Maxus Drago knows Best!Tyler and Jonathan went back to New Vestroia to Fight maxus drago. They explored until they found footprints that looked like Dark Hound and Grakas Hound. They entered another tunnel, and found another Door. They went in, and instead of water Maxus Drago's Platform was surrounded by Lava, and was lit by Torches. "Humans? What are you doing here?" Maxus Drago asked. "We want to be the best brawlers, and to do that we need to beat you," Tyler answered. "Very well. I will show mercy and keep myself at 630G power instead of using my ability to make me go to 5000." said Maxus Drago. Tyler was about to say Bakugan Brawl, but Jonathan said it first. "WHAT ARE YOU DOING?" Tyler screamed. "Leave this guy to me," Jonathan answered.Jonathan: Gate Card, Set! Bakugan Brawl! Sub-Terra Elfin Stand with 700G!Maxus Drago: Good choice. Bakugan Brawl! I stand on your card with 630G!Jonathan: Gate card Open! Triangle Gate so I'm at 800G and you're at 680G!Maxus Drago: You win that one!Jonathan: Gate Card Set! Bakugan Brawl! Sub-Terra Foxbat Stand with 490G!TO BE CONTINUEDChapter 11: Maxus Drago Needs his AbilityMaxus Drago: Bakugan Brawl! I stand with 630G!Jonathan: Gate Card Open! River Valley! So I'm at 670 and your at 720! Quick Ability card activate! Burning sands so I get +80 G bringing me to 750!Maxus Drago: I need ability cards! But the only Way I can use them is if I get an owner...Jonathan: Gate Card Set! Bakugan Brawl! Sub-Terra Fencer 640G stand!Maxus Drago: Bakugan Brawl! I stand with 630G!Jonathan: Gate Card open! Pleasant Stone so I'm at 840G and your at 730G!Maxus Drago: I... lost.Maxus Drago came apart and all the pieces went to Tyler. "Huh, why didn't I get them?" Jonathan asked. "Because you have enough power. Maxus Helios may help you though," Neo Drago answered. "At least ONE Maxus is defeated..." Tyler said.Chapter 12: Haos v.s. Haos!Jonathan had to go home after they went back to earth, and Tyler went to the Center of Town. Someone appeared out of nowhere, he was masked, and Challenged Tyler to a Brawl! "You and me, a brawl..." Lightstriker said. "Ok," Tyler answered. Bakugan Brawl!Tyler and Lightstriker: Gate Card Set!Tyler: Bakugan Brawl! Haos Ingram 500G Stand!Lightstriker: Bakugan Brawl! Haos Terrorclaw 510G Stand! Gate Card Open! Low Bridge, bakugan with lowest G-Power wins, you win by 10G.Tyler: Yeah! Bakugan Brawl! Haos Delta Drago II stand with 650G!Lightstriker: Bakugan Brawl! Haos Spin Drago stand with 650G!Tyler: Gate card, OPEN! Dragonoid, all dragonoids get an additional G-Power Boost! So i'm at 990 and your at 990! But I use the ability card Golden Launcher, so I get 200G so I'm at 1190G!THIS BRAWL WILL END GOOD OR BAD>Chapter 13: Lightstriker is Worse than expected.Lightstriker: Ugh, I lose that one Again!Tyler and Lightstriker: Gate Card Set!Lightstriker: Bakugan Brawl! Haos Midnight Percival 550G stand!Tyler: Bakugan Brawl! Haos Foxbat 650G stand! Gate card Open! Reflection gate, so I'm at 800G and your at 700G!Lightstriker: You've GOT to be kidding!"Lightstriker, remove your mask!" Tyler ordered. Lightstriker removed his mask, revealing none other than..."Vilgan?" Tyler yelled. "WHO ELSE?" Vilgan asked. "Uh, maybe Greegol! Last time I checked you were a Darkus Brawler," Tyler answered.

[wilpokeMember]

It's good but chapters are short.

[Metaaltair825Member]

I know, because when it gets long the message box(Where you type) gets glitchy.

[YoshipatrolMember]

I know, because when it gets long the message box(Where you type) gets glitchy.

....? No it doesn't...Anyways just wanted to let you know that when you use a script format you really don't need quotes around dialogue as thats pretty much telling us that they're talking... AND when you said "Tyler and Vilgan:" in the first chapter you could have just said both, as no one else was there (or no one talking at least) so there would have been no confusion on who "both" was reffering to.

[Metaaltair825Member]

Thanks for the tips Yoshi! Also, do you like my story so far? It's Ok of you don't.

[wilpokeMember]

I like it metaaltair. And check out my fan fiction.

[AdminKeymaster]

Metaaltair, please tr to edit your posts so that all chapters are on the main topic post so users don't have to search through the pages for the chapters.

[xavier16Member]

Its nice ;Dbut I thinks it too long

[Metaaltair825Member]

BREAKING NEWS… I have decided to make my fanfic in different books so the whole thing doesn't get confusing. Each book will have 30 chapters.

[Metaaltair825Member]

Chapter 24: TIME TO FACE EPIC!!!A new enemy stood where Mechanical Overlord was before he fell apart. His name was EPICLAY. "I epicly challange Tyler to an epic brawl where I will epicly beat him!" He said.Both: Gauntlet Power Strike!Epiclay: Bakugan Epic Brawl! Epic Viper Helios epicly stand with an Epic amount of epic 650G!!!Tyler: Bakugan Brawl! Ventus Atmos 660G stand! Epiclay: Epic Gate Card Epicly open! EPIC HELPER!!!Tyler: I'm not familiar with that card!Epiclay: Since I have an EPIC Bakugan, I get DOUBLE your G-Power and you get no gate bonus!E Gauntlet: Viper Helios 1320G!T Gauntlet: Atmos 660G.Tyler: Ability Card activate! Ventus Tornado! You get no bonus and you lose 200G!E Gauntlet: Viper Helios 450G.Tyler: Ability card activate! Bird Call! T Gauntlet: Atmos 860GViper Helios Shrinks into a ball.Epiclay: What! I epicly have no Epic Life Points epicly left!

[AdminKeymaster]

2 much brawling xD

[darkmaster21Member]

to much epicly epicness

[AlphaPercivalMember]

you can never have too much epic! 8)

[Metaaltair825Member]

you can never have too much epic! 8)

Completly agreed. And how is there too much Brawling, Kevin? What else should I put anyway? Also, the effect of Windy Drain is it cuts oppenent's Gs in Half, and gives half of the drained G Power to the user of the ability.

[AdminKeymaster]

Metaaltair, please tr to edit your posts so that all chapters are on the main topic post so users don't have to search through the pages for the chapters.

LOL, yeah, you dont want us searchin throught this ENTIRE page, LOL

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