[Haos-EmilyMember]

Lmao ive seen many people doin this, But soo what, Im just gonna do ti anyway, It will not be set out in script form, Script form is for Amatures who don't know hwo to write, if you ahve trouble with this leave now…Episode one:The Eltie Brawlers!'In a world were People had never heard of Dan Kuso, and the Bakuagn brawlers, The Bakugan cards were falling from the sky, The Bakugan were not like the ones that Earth and New vestroia new off, They Drew energy From their partners Spirits, The more Joy they were in, The higher the G-power, the More Angry they were, The more G-power, Sorrow Ment clumsy and low G-power. Roxxi, With many people around the World called Exak, Were Amazed. But If only People would Understand, That Bakugan Eltie..Was Not a Game'A young Girl called Roxxi, Was Running , When A boy stepped in her way. "I want a Brawl Roxxi, The web Says that your ranked 87th, while im 90th, So i want a battle.!". He looked at her With stern eyes. "Ha, you noly wanna get Beaten!". Roxxi and the boy, Named Jayi Drew a Card, "Field Eltie! Open!" The Bright Colours Flowed, And Time started to slow, Until They Appeared In a Dimension Called, Vestoia.. "Gate Card set!" One card turned Gold, and the other Turned Purple. Roxxi Took out a White and Gold ball. "Bakugan brawl! Bakuagn stand! Haos Mantris! Stand!" The ball Opened on her card, and Suddenly a Huge preying Mantris Appeared, 'Haos Mantris at 340 G's' The Scouter Called, She pulled It down. if he intends on using Darkus, Ill easily Counter that!"Bakugan brawl! Darkus Juggerniod Stand!" the Black and Purple ball Landed

[YoshipatrolMember]

OMG THANK YOU! THANK YOU THANK YOU!!!! no scripts, its an actual story, i'll be reading this one 😉EDIT: Kk I read it, its a bit hard to follow but its still ok (at least the spelling is good) You also messed up at one point where you out of nowhere changed the girl's name from Roxxi to Emily lol. I'd sugest maybe have the bakupod or Scouter (I think thats what it was called in your story) talk after every G-Power increase/decrease, just cutaway from the story for a sec to put: Bakupod: Haos Mantris G increase by 200" or something.

[Haos-EmilyMember]

OMG THANK YOU! THANK YOU THANK YOU!!!! no scripts, its an actual story, i'll be reading this one 😉EDIT: Kk I read it, its a bit hard to follow but its still ok (at least the spelling is good) You also messed up at one point where you out of nowhere changed the girl's name from Roxxi to Emily lol. I'd sugest maybe have the bakupod or Scouter (I think thats what it was called in your story) talk after every G-Power increase/decrease, just cutaway from the story for a sec to put: Bakupod: Haos Mantris G increase by 200" or something.

yeah, I always change the Nams outta knowwhere, Maybe cuz i was talkin to emily Harrison? I don't know! loli might do that, i did this in a Rush, I really needed to go and check on something, So episode 2 willl ahve more Detial, I Can do number 2 now if you want, also i will change the roxxi emily thing XD

[YoshipatrolMember]

OMG THANK YOU! THANK YOU THANK YOU!!!! no scripts, its an actual story, i'll be reading this one 😉EDIT: Kk I read it, its a bit hard to follow but its still ok (at least the spelling is good) You also messed up at one point where you out of nowhere changed the girl's name from Roxxi to Emily lol. I'd sugest maybe have the bakupod or Scouter (I think thats what it was called in your story) talk after every G-Power increase/decrease, just cutaway from the story for a sec to put: Bakupod: Haos Mantris G increase by 200" or something.

yeah, I always change the Nams outta knowwhere, Maybe cuz i was talkin to emily Harrison? I don't know! loli might do that, i did this in a Rush, I really needed to go and check on something, So episode 2 willl ahve more Detial, I Can do number 2 now if you want, also i will change the roxxi emily thing XD

Yeah sure I'd be interested in number 2, it'd give me a better first taste of the story

[Haos-EmilyMember]

Episode 2, Part 1:Camo ChameleonsThe Ball that came from roxxi's New card, Landed and opened up, It was wolf life, With Spikes.. The bakugan that came from the other boys card, was a Darkus Falconier.."Is that, a Fangerus? and a Falconier?" Roxxi woundered how they had gotten there, suddenly Roxxi started Seeing things, The Fangerus Started Attacking The Falconier, when suddenly, the Falconier Dissapeared? The Fangerus turned aroudn to Roxxi and Roared at her, Its cold Blue eyes where locked on her. 'Why do you think like this Child? We are not Toys!' After she Open and closed her eyes, the battle had ended, and they where standing where they where before.. 'Ill be Back roxxi, and next time, It will be Different!' he ran off, But Roxxi didn't care, what she wanted to know is, Did that Bakugan Just talk?|Later on that day|"So what your saying is, That, That Fangerus talked?" Shukan Pointed the bakuagn on her Computer desk. "Yeah that one Shukan," She picked up the Ball, and studied it Carefully, Did she Just think it up? Did it really happen?. After a Long Debate with Shukan, The ventus Brawler, She Logged off, and went to bed, She was unaware of what the Fangerus was Doing though..."How did i end up in this state, i Must get back to Vestroia.." She started to Move sideways. When she gave up, she couldn't move, But what would Happen Tommorow, Would Surely change the Eltie brawlers Forever...Part 2 Comin up Yoshi..

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