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Here is the first chapter, still needs some work. But there is more to come To Be Named By: Colin(Rattleoid) Chapter 1:Darkness Devin fell onto millions of glass shards and screamed in pain as an enormous build up of pressure fell upon his legs. It was all over. He knew that. He knew all his friends were most likely dead and he watched hopelessly as his tormentor prepared to finish him off. Devin sat in math class bored out of his mind he knew all this stuff, he was at the top of his class, but had to do all the reviews and worksheets everyone else did. So he spent most of class wishing that something would happen to get him out of class. Just then the bell rang, it was three o’clock and school was over for the day. Devin was, for the most part, an average kid. He had black hair that he kept short and spiky, he was a bit tall for his age of thirteen, and he was very thin. He lived in Evergreen Park, Illinois and went to central junior high. Devin rushed out of school and headed to the park where he had plans to meet his friends Terry and Roy, Terry was short had straight short blond hair, was thirteen and was also very thin while Roy was average height had black curly hair and was fourteen. Just as Devin saw and began to run toward them It happened. The ground began to shake and enormous crevices began to appear in the ground and thousands of dark spheres flooded out into the sky blocking out the sun, the clouds and everything else in the sky. Unfortunately, they didn’t all head to the sky, some formed into a kind of humanoid shape and began to attack the people and the things surrounding them. Everyone began to flee , Devin and his friends ran hoping they could find shelter. But the creatures were extraordinarily fast. Luckily they were able to get to Pappy’s, a local fast food restaurant, and hid behind the counter. They were left with many questions in their heads, what was happening and what could be done to stop it.So, any questions or comments?EDIT-Come on, nothing?
I live in ilinois were all we get are realy bad thunder storms and tornados I kinda want a eathquake or 2! lol jk
Dude I didn't know you lived in IL so do I. I live near chicago,you?
what'ya gonna do?the odds are stacked against youback against the wallgotta give it your all ah ah ah ah ahthis is the final stand ah ah ah ah ah ahthe power's in your handtwo worlds collide on the insideyou gotta fight for whats rightbefore it's gone, gone, gonethis is...uh,uh,uh...I forgot the last word.
umm...hmm...i cant figure it out its just to hard lol
