Goldcomets fan fic

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• October 27, 2009 at 6:43 pm #221705
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  I thought of this cause i was bored and i thought it was good so i wrote it downChapter 1:It was a warm summer day in Ellesmere Port.Neil, Elliot and Emily were at Whitby Park playing football in the feild behind the park.Elliot ran towards Neil in goal, ball at his feet, he passed it to Emily who returned the ball with a cross to Elliots head. Elliot leaped for the ball but never made it as he vanished along with Emily and NeilSoon Neil woke up. there were voices all around him; Who is he?, Were did he come from? Neil opened his eyes into the blinding light. His initial thought was were am I? He then thought were are Emily and Elliot. He jumped to his feet looked around but was imediatelygrabbed by the arms and dragged to a large building. He was sat in a room with a green, funny smelling surprisingly taty drink.A dooropened and Elliot and Emily entered'What are we doing here' asked Neil'I dont know' Emily and Elliot repliedIf you like it pm me and i will wright out the next chapter

  October 28, 2009 at 8:09 pm #319144
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  i need at least 5 pms saying to write out chapter 2

  November 4, 2009 at 6:03 pm #326402
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  Chapter 3The same door opened again and a man with a crown entered.

  November 4, 2009 at 6:45 pm #326435
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  Chapter 4In the forest the group heard a strange noise and went to investigate.They crouched in some bushes. They saw some men throwing small creatures into cages and locking them." I cant stand this" said EmilyThe group all swallowed a pill and began to change.Emily grew a pair of wings, her clothes changed into metal plates and she brought out a golden staff.Elliot began to graw fur and his arm turned into a mechanical claw.Neil brew scaly and a long tail and a skull grew over his head.( for those who dont have an imaginationEmily: [ftp=ftp://http://usagi-moni.deviantart.com/art/Angewomon-73810892]http://usagi-moni.deviantart.com/art/Angewomon-73810892[/ftp] with metal plates and a staffNeil: [ftp=ftp://http://yume-puppet.deviantart.com/art/Greymon-15798601]http://yume-puppet.deviantart.com/art/Greymon-15798601[/ftp]Elliot:[ftp=ftp://http://nr3.deviantart.com/art/Were-Garurumon-55201954]http://nr3.deviantart.com/art/Were-Garurumon-55201954[/ftp]

  November 4, 2009 at 7:24 pm #326554
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  neil, you went 1,3,4 its 1,2,3,4. i suggest doing the #'s in order

  November 4, 2009 at 7:32 pm #326557
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  oh yeah i forgot to say i put 1 and 2 together because they were short chapters

  November 4, 2009 at 8:37 pm #326570
  novawolf

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  lol I always thought maths was your speciality!

  November 4, 2009 at 8:46 pm #326571
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  lol I always thought maths was your speciality!

  Math is mine too. ;D

  November 4, 2009 at 8:48 pm #326572
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  I HATE IT its so irritating and confunsing.(soz for spam, GC)

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