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Mr. Story
« on: March 02, 2011, 05:55:21 PM »
Hi! This m fanfiction!

    One day, Shun was walking and some random loser walked up to him and said "Hey Tonto!" (Spanish for stupid) Shun looked at him with a face of disgust. The loser just stared. The, Shun busted the dude up with a stick. Yay! Shun rocks! The loser got made and challenged Shun to a brawl. He accepted. Later, they had the brawl. Shun started by setting a Gate Card. "Bakugan Brawl! Stand Ventus Taylean!"
"Bakugan Brawl! Stand Pyrus Lavanoid!" (lavanoid looks like a blob of lava in the shape of a person with a krakix face) "Ability activate!" Taylean Jumps up and shoots out his claws. As he lands, He slashes lavanoid and bits of lava go everywere. Once on the ground, Taylean beats up lavanoid and all thats left is a bunch lava bits. All of the lava disappears and lavanoid appears in ball form. Life force Zero. Huzzah! Shun wins! Then, Shun goes and pushes the random loser off a cliff. THE END
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Re: Mr. Story
« Reply #1 on: March 02, 2011, 06:11:32 PM »
*stabs* Sorry, it's a little habit of mine. I do it whenever I see or hear something stupid or repetitive.

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Re: Mr. Story
« Reply #2 on: March 02, 2011, 06:39:23 PM »
Err... What again?

If it doesn't continue like that loser later reappears as a cyborg that combines with the Lavanoid to form a Technoroid or something who destroys Shun, then it's a Fail.

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Re: Mr. Story
« Reply #3 on: March 03, 2011, 04:01:58 PM »
But Shun is the best in the world!  :o
« Last Edit: March 03, 2011, 04:03:40 PM by Kaliam11 »
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Re: Mr. Story
« Reply #4 on: March 03, 2011, 04:30:48 PM »
Fine! I will do part 2.

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Re: Mr. Story
« Reply #5 on: March 03, 2011, 04:47:44 PM »
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Re: Mr. Story
« Reply #6 on: March 03, 2011, 05:21:00 PM »
Anyone else found this extremely confusing and creepy?
And if I may ask; why is the title "Mr. Story?"

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Re: Mr. Story
« Reply #7 on: March 04, 2011, 12:49:50 PM »
Its called Mr. Story because somebody already used the title, "My Story"
Anyways, this part 2 of "Mr. Story"

A few days after Shun beat lavanoid, he met Claus walking on the sidewalk. He had a bunch of old Vexos stuff. Shun walked up to Claus and said "What is that stuff for?" Claus said they were for sale, and Shun bought an Energy Sword. Shun went to the forest to practice and he chopped down a bunch of trees. Then, Suddenly, A GIANT GUY MADE OF LAVA burst out of the trees. It tried to step on Shun but he blocked the foot with his energy sword. He Jumped back and threw Taylean. Taylean became huge and punched the lava thing. "wait a minute!" said Shun, "Its lavanoid!" Shun used an ability and Taylean shot out his claws. He slashed with them but it was useless :o  Lavanoid beat Shun and taylean. They got sad :(
MwaHaHaHa. Lavanoid laughed. Then, Claus came out of nowhere and said "Bakugan Brawl! Stand Aquos HammerShark!" Hammershark beat lavanoid and everyone was happy!! (awesome) ;D
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